Example of: Excessive mechanical errors

Sally staired out the window. "Sam, she said," I need to leave this place." "I want to come with you, he repied, tightning his grip on her her hand. "I cant picture life without you by my side"

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Sally stared out the window. "Sam," she said," I need to leave this place."

"I want to come with you," he replied, tightening his grip on her hand. "I can't picture life without you by my side."

 


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