Examples of: No scene anchors
They got into the car to speed away from the party. As they drove along the road, Michelle stared out the window. Tom's silence was deafening, just as his shouting had been earlier.
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They got into Tom's pickup and sped away from the party. As they drove along the small back road, Michelle stared out the window at the maze of passing trees. Tom's silence was deafening, just as his shouting had been earlier, and her hand played with the blue vinyl armrest as she wondered who would be the first to speak.
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